What do u think abt this- ?

Question:1. " i was waiting and waiting for hours for u... to see u smile -oh ur lovely smile....which wud light up my days and contagiously make me smile ! "
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2. "i was waiting to tell u once again...perhaps the thousandth time..i love u with my heart and soul...not with a desire to possess u but a desire to always be able to see u before me..making my life miraculous"
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3. "i was waiting..to again forget the miseries of my life....to laugh with u...to be happy with u "

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4. "i am waiting..still i am...with patience...for i know...when i will see u again...it would be a beautiful day, a beautiful moment...so beautiful that all this waiting seems painless "
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WHICH ONE IS THE BEST ????

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: 1. " i was waiting and waiting for hours for u... to see u smile -oh ur lovely smile....which wud light up my days and contagiously make me smile ! "
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2. "i was waiting to tell u once again...perhaps the thousandth time..i love u with my heart and soul...not with a desire to possess u but a desire to always be able to see u before me..making my life miraculous"
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3. "i was waiting..to again forget the miseries of my life....to laugh with u...to be happy with u "

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4. "i am waiting..still i am...with patience...for i know...when i will see u again...it would be a beautiful day, a beautiful moment...so beautiful that all this waiting seems painless "
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WHICH ONE IS THE BEST ????

all r nice, but no. 4 is better, 2 is the best
i don't know why but i just felt it

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2. ************
3. ***
4. *****

they all sound good, no poem can be a bad poem cause it's all about how you understand it

i like the 3rd one. it gives me more feeling of reality than the other 3. and it sounds sad and happy at same time :]

honestly.. i jealous of you... cuz i like them all

I like the 3rd one most of all but the others are not bad.