What do you think about this poem~~?

Question:We once had bright green grass, Crystal clear water
Blue sky’s, cold white snow
Now all of the pollution is starting to show
We are cutting down trees, building factories
Driving our cars with no care
There won’t be rainforests, oceans or mountains for us to see
Soon this world will be nothing but giant buildings
Where will all of the animals go?
Each day we fill this land with trash
As we need more and more land to build on
We take more and more of nature
I’d rather see a land with green than another mall
How about you?
We once had nature, but the pollution is starting to show

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: We once had bright green grass, Crystal clear water
Blue sky’s, cold white snow
Now all of the pollution is starting to show
We are cutting down trees, building factories
Driving our cars with no care
There won’t be rainforests, oceans or mountains for us to see
Soon this world will be nothing but giant buildings
Where will all of the animals go?
Each day we fill this land with trash
As we need more and more land to build on
We take more and more of nature
I’d rather see a land with green than another mall
How about you?
We once had nature, but the pollution is starting to show

Yeah, it's great...and Sadly, it's true.

i really like it

its kinda scary

but its necessary
if it wasn't there would be no point

its ok if ur in first grade

Well you capitalized Crystal (Why?) and after each day shoulda been 7 commas.

Only kidding. Good.

I think it's awesome. I'm kind of a tree-hugger. I think this states clearly that we should stop pollution, and it really changes someone's thoughts about polluting