Will you read my poem please?

Question:One of the happiest cards, in my opinion.

TEN OF CUPS

The swinging door,
the children's shouts,
big bear hugs
and butterfly kisses.
Work's weary worries
slide from my shoulders,
drowned in
her radiant smile.
The world,
that chaos,
that struggle...
it has no place here,
not here
among family.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: One of the happiest cards, in my opinion.

TEN OF CUPS

The swinging door,
the children's shouts,
big bear hugs
and butterfly kisses.
Work's weary worries
slide from my shoulders,
drowned in
her radiant smile.
The world,
that chaos,
that struggle...
it has no place here,
not here
among family.

definitive. nice.
reflection IS part of the life

:) nice

I don't know anything about Tarot cards so if you say it's a happy card I'll believe you. I like the poem and it's meaning.

I love the poems you write....

Lovely!!!

Nice work, but I'd develop the ending a wee bit more.
Enjoy.