Blue Rose's Poem?

Question:Day of Judgement

when we are all at end,
and wer'e all at are fears,
i dont want to die afraid,
but loved with your sad tears,
when the all human race ends,
can we end at a brighter side,
we will all end together,
noone would suffer alone,
the peace will come
and the wars should be gone,
The pain will be missing,
the crying will soften,
and ill remember your smile
as we fade to stars
this world we destroyed
will no longer be ours
and yet life will go on,
more surreal then to be made
and the world would be cleansed
from the sins that have been made

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Day of Judgement

when we are all at end,
and wer'e all at are fears,
i dont want to die afraid,
but loved with your sad tears,
when the all human race ends,
can we end at a brighter side,
we will all end together,
noone would suffer alone,
the peace will come
and the wars should be gone,
The pain will be missing,
the crying will soften,
and ill remember your smile
as we fade to stars
this world we destroyed
will no longer be ours
and yet life will go on,
more surreal then to be made
and the world would be cleansed
from the sins that have been made

I like the poem, but I disagree, about judgement day I think our judgement comes when we die, and the world won't be destroyed, there is an infinite source in the universe, if something ends, another will appear, to me faith go a long way. Alba

Emo.

EDIT: I loved how you rhymed "made" with "made". What talent. Bravo. Bellisimo.

good poem ...a really good poem

I think it should be published somewhere

Wow Rose..Beautiful Poem..You have a rare talent for words.

It's lovely

It is a lovely poem Rose.

Rose it is beautiful, great writing

Muse, just because your bitter and can't come up with anything yourself doesn't mean you have to insult other peoples good writing

I like it !!
It is dense and powerful...
keep up the good work and ignore the negative comments. Anyone who has done a bit of creative work...knows how difficult it is to write something.

good luck

wow amazing

Keep writing don't let anyone stop you. You have amazing talent Rose.

Actually, I find this to be amazing. I love how the subject is the end of the world, it is a subject that I think very much upon, and I haven't read any poems on it. You're the first. Amazing. Great Job.