A little vampyre poem for a sunday. Do you like it.?

Question:"lost"

It seems that I was never born,
so many human lives ago.
Just a simple freak of life,
yet somehow I still remain.

I know I am denial perceived,
but the brutal truth still lives.
I am content with deadly calm,
and yet I don't know why.

My long life is never fatal,
I live only not to die.
All that I have loved have left,
on and on I still survive.

Fighting through this hellish curse,
and the end I cannot find.
Unarmed I walk the hills of hell,
Living for the end of time.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: "lost"

It seems that I was never born,
so many human lives ago.
Just a simple freak of life,
yet somehow I still remain.

I know I am denial perceived,
but the brutal truth still lives.
I am content with deadly calm,
and yet I don't know why.

My long life is never fatal,
I live only not to die.
All that I have loved have left,
on and on I still survive.

Fighting through this hellish curse,
and the end I cannot find.
Unarmed I walk the hills of hell,
Living for the end of time.

very very good!

I am not sure one need be a vampire to feel this way. Being alone, exiled perhaps and surrounded by the alien beings of another generation or I imagine the suffering of the Alzhiemers patient walking through a life devoid of yesterday and tomorrow, without even the idea of substance or what the end means.... without any idea of intent..
like searching for traction in zero gravity . A life devoid of words.
I enjoyed your poem..

ok first off vampyre isnt for this poem youshould use vampire as in fictional vampires.so obviously you have no idea about the occult and secondly it sucks dreadfully. horrible ew ew gross ew ew ew get a life

good afternoon prince
I like it if I were a vampyre i would feel like this i believe

i love it! great job!! =D

hey! what's with the thumbs downs? it is a great poem!!

Sehr gut! it reminds me of EDWARD! ??! are you Edward?!?!

I liked it.

i'm confused by Stephy E...i thought vampyre was just an odd spelling of vampire, now she's saying vampyres exist and vampires don't?

nice poem. you're definitely branching out a bit now. i'm not sure i understand...2/1, but that caould just be me.

i really like it.
i still dont c how u write so good.

You definitely have a talent for playing with words, but this piece, for me ,became too predictable. I liked your line " I live only not to die."

I've always been fascinated by time. Your final two verses resonate in my soul. Further, the use of "unarmed" as the poet describes the walk through the hills of Hell adds a special note of horror to the poem. I could physically feel a chill as I read it. Congratulations on this one!

Once again, I am not disappointed to read what you have written. The timeless torment of the vampire who cannot die, and must forever be the predator. The only reason to live not to die, and unable to do so anyways. Good job DP.

marisa dear....its write so well...
i like this one big bro! it fun! fascinating! fantastic! alliteration!! lol i had no idea you could spell vampyre that way!
~Grasshopper