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Question:Clive Owen's face is a sewer for the refuse of my splintered love
Pierced by the penis of rejection
And oozing its sinuous innards in an endless rush of hatred
Clive Owen's face is covered with black tar and I am eating it
His pale flesh appears through the tar
Which melts away and drips into a pool of anxiety
Its amorphous presence assails my bodily orifices
As I scream it winds its way into my mouth, my jaw locked
Clive Owen bellows a hearty laugh and all fades to black


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Clive Owen's face is a sewer for the refuse of my splintered love
Pierced by the penis of rejection
And oozing its sinuous innards in an endless rush of hatred
Clive Owen's face is covered with black tar and I am eating it
His pale flesh appears through the tar
Which melts away and drips into a pool of anxiety
Its amorphous presence assails my bodily orifices
As I scream it winds its way into my mouth, my jaw locked
Clive Owen bellows a hearty laugh and all fades to black

Honestly speaking, it's not really good
Sorry!!!!!

I didn't like it very much!

You have painted a very clear picture for your disdain of Clive Owens. Deep.