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Question:Plese read my poem and tell me what you think about it. If you have any advice, please give it. Thanks.

Doubt

Dou you really love me?
Do I really love you?
Should we even be?

We get along so well
It's one reason I fell,
I fell in love with you.
It's been so long
Since I've seen you.
You sound the same
But you seem tamed.

Do you really love me?
Should we even be?

You're voice is like a mysterious mask.
The hard part is the task.
The talk of understanding you.
What do you hide under that smile?
My impatience will get the
Best of me, if I wait a while.

Do you really love me?
Should we even be?

There is nothing I can do,
But let time pass
And hope we last.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Plese read my poem and tell me what you think about it. If you have any advice, please give it. Thanks.

Doubt

Dou you really love me?
Do I really love you?
Should we even be?

We get along so well
It's one reason I fell,
I fell in love with you.
It's been so long
Since I've seen you.
You sound the same
But you seem tamed.

Do you really love me?
Should we even be?

You're voice is like a mysterious mask.
The hard part is the task.
The talk of understanding you.
What do you hide under that smile?
My impatience will get the
Best of me, if I wait a while.

Do you really love me?
Should we even be?

There is nothing I can do,
But let time pass
And hope we last.

Doubt edited

Do you really love me?
Do i even love you?
should we even be together
i dont know what to do

We get along so well
Its always like a living hell
I can not live without you
I dont know what im going to do
|Since i first saw you my heart was aflame
But since then you have been so tame

Do i really love you do you really love me
Should we even be?

You're voice is like a mysterious mask.
Reading you is a harder task
Why is there this hidden mask?
What do you hide under that smile?
That you cover with denile
What is hiding under that lieing smile

Do i love you?Do you really love me?
Should we even be?

There is nothing I can do,
I cant even understand you
All i can do is hope and pray
That are paths will cross again someday

Good luck with the poem hope that has helped
Nash

Sounds more like a song to me. But it's pretty good.

it rymes too much

thats a 10 outta 10. i LOVE that poem! it'll prolly be published one day!

u kind of overdid it in the rhyming part but it's still good

This sounds like a song. Where did you get this? I know you didn't just pull this out of your head.

Really super good!!!!! 10 and I usually don't rate poems myself because I don't think I can do it right but I gotta say 10.

Rating 1-10 , i would pick 9.
its really good ,
it rhymes alot ,
it sounds like a song.

songs are usualy in poetry.......well anyway

i don't think this is a 10 ....but maybe a 8.5 or 9 ..somewhere aroudn there

This poem reminds me of the exact same thing i'm going through..so since i am a poetry and fan and is going witht the same thing right now....there is only one advice from me personally

Use your senses...your skills...your mind...and your emotions

And then if you use all those correctly it will be an 11 out of 10