Help me with my poem!!?

Question:I'm starting this poem, and I am stuck and don't know what to say next. And let me know what you think about the beginning, and do you have something better.
It's talking about being able to acheive my dreams.

I feel like, if things don't heal right.
If I don't get my dreams, then I want feel right.
And want live right.
So can you tell what's life if you don't achieve.
Everything that I want to be never comes to the light,
that I want to see.

That's it right now, and I'm stuck.
Can you help me?

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I'm starting this poem, and I am stuck and don't know what to say next. And let me know what you think about the beginning, and do you have something better.
It's talking about being able to acheive my dreams.

I feel like, if things don't heal right.
If I don't get my dreams, then I want feel right.
And want live right.
So can you tell what's life if you don't achieve.
Everything that I want to be never comes to the light,
that I want to see.

That's it right now, and I'm stuck.
Can you help me?

To achieve life's dreams
I won't lower my sights.
Everything I want to be,
Has to feel right.

To do this myself,
Will take hard work, they say.
The pleasure it brings,
Is the big payday!

Does this give you a jump start? Maybe you can take this and change it a little to suit your own thoughts or words. I hope it helps you. Good luck!

I want to see what I have not seen,
and having seen which I do not know
grow beyond myself

Beyond myself being more than me I will see that I can achieve.
everything that I want to be never comes to light,
unless I want to see the light.

I must choose the light in order to see.