The day regret poem?

Question:~the day regret~

Words in every line pop-out like pop up books,
tired,sick,love,hate,forget,regret,
my mind is helpless to your rapeture.
Pulses throught my body,
I'm liking the anticaption,
I want you less, but I want more feeling,
I kiss your neck gently signing you more meaning,
Let the pulses sieze the night, for it is all feelings.
gentle,hostile sounds of nothing else,
And the voice returns on a monday, live like theres no tomorrow,
live like theres no more time on earth,
no time for love but feelings for one another.

Your just another sin,
not for one of us to believe in.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: ~the day regret~

Words in every line pop-out like pop up books,
tired,sick,love,hate,forget,regret,
my mind is helpless to your rapeture.
Pulses throught my body,
I'm liking the anticaption,
I want you less, but I want more feeling,
I kiss your neck gently signing you more meaning,
Let the pulses sieze the night, for it is all feelings.
gentle,hostile sounds of nothing else,
And the voice returns on a monday, live like theres no tomorrow,
live like theres no more time on earth,
no time for love but feelings for one another.

Your just another sin,
not for one of us to believe in.

i like it alot.
you have great word choices and diction
and thus gave insight and depth to you piece
well done
keep writing you are clearly quite talented

i adore the poem...the confusion and the anguish, especially...and oh, the regret...

I liked it. Raw emotion. Very nice

Well done, one of the most interesting poems i've ever read. and one of the good ones i've read too.

I woudl give it a 9.5 out of 10

Aside from a few grammatical errors which I'm sure you can correct on you draft like your should be youo're and theres should be there's it's very good. Very deep. I like it.