Is this a good poem for a contest?

Question:Forever Immortalized

Forever immortalized is this grasp,
This hold,
This clutch.
Forever Immortalized are these hands,
These wrists,
These bodies, intertwined.
Until this photograph is stained,
Ripped,
Torn.
Forever Immortalized,
My hand in hers,
Past suicide scars rubbing against their mate,
Hearts beating a staccato rhythm,
Blood pouring,
Mixing,
For eternity.
This vibrant red of blood,
Dripping,
Soaking into the floor.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Forever Immortalized

Forever immortalized is this grasp,
This hold,
This clutch.
Forever Immortalized are these hands,
These wrists,
These bodies, intertwined.
Until this photograph is stained,
Ripped,
Torn.
Forever Immortalized,
My hand in hers,
Past suicide scars rubbing against their mate,
Hearts beating a staccato rhythm,
Blood pouring,
Mixing,
For eternity.
This vibrant red of blood,
Dripping,
Soaking into the floor.

I would say no becasue this poem jumps around everywhere. This is also a common subject in a lot of poems. I can see everyone writing these types of poems and becoming more and more common. I think what win's contest is unique things.

That's morbid. Enter it: people eat that **** up.

yes - i love it

It is worth entering in a contest.

It goes really deep if you think about it. Pretty good!

depends on what kind of contest..... but, its good writing.