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How do you explain angelic beauty, covered with the innocence of youth

How do you begin to show how this being makes you feel

How it perplexes your world, fills it with questions and meaning

What is it that makes a mute, tiny, infant so loveable

What is it about this child that can entrance your mind and lock your eyes on this

nonjudgmental being of innocence

How can it say without words don't ever abandon me and let love be the reward

How can this infant have eyes that stare back with the wonders of a thousand galaxies

How can your world be falling apart yet when you look down and lay eyes on this

child you know everything will be fine

What gives them this power to change us so and make us feel this way

I may not have the answer but from experiences I have an idea

We show them the way to go in life and in return we receive love that fills our life and hearts to the capacity we never knew we had

And life becomes a box of chocolates that satisfies the undying hunger within


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How do you explain angelic beauty, covered with the innocence of youth

How do you begin to show how this being makes you feel

How it perplexes your world, fills it with questions and meaning

What is it that makes a mute, tiny, infant so loveable

What is it about this child that can entrance your mind and lock your eyes on this

nonjudgmental being of innocence

How can it say without words don't ever abandon me and let love be the reward

How can this infant have eyes that stare back with the wonders of a thousand galaxies

How can your world be falling apart yet when you look down and lay eyes on this

child you know everything will be fine

What gives them this power to change us so and make us feel this way

I may not have the answer but from experiences I have an idea

We show them the way to go in life and in return we receive love that fills our life and hearts to the capacity we never knew we had

And life becomes a box of chocolates that satisfies the undying hunger within

Beautiful, and expresses the thoughts and feelings every parent has had at some time looking at a child. Very good insight, expressed in an easy to follow manner. Thanks for sharing.

Then it sounds like you have a maternal spirit. Thanks for choosing my answer! Report It


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