How does this sound so far??

Question:Her legs wrapped tightly around his slender waist
her back shoved against the wall
her heavy sighs tickles his ears
her hands running through his thick lushous locks of hair
his lips pressed firmly against her chest
his hands furiousy pulling at her shirt
he pulls her into him and throws her onto the bed
she gives him a devious smile and bites her lower lip
he dropps his pantz and begins to pull at hers
Slowly he crawls atop her
her arms reaching to the top of the bed
His hands wraps around her thin wrists
as his lips brush hers
he pulls back in a flirtatious manner
a smile curls around her lips as she searches for his....

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Her legs wrapped tightly around his slender waist
her back shoved against the wall
her heavy sighs tickles his ears
her hands running through his thick lushous locks of hair
his lips pressed firmly against her chest
his hands furiousy pulling at her shirt
he pulls her into him and throws her onto the bed
she gives him a devious smile and bites her lower lip
he dropps his pantz and begins to pull at hers
Slowly he crawls atop her
her arms reaching to the top of the bed
His hands wraps around her thin wrists
as his lips brush hers
he pulls back in a flirtatious manner
a smile curls around her lips as she searches for his....

EXCELLENT .love the scene-the way it's described. keep on writing more like a sequel.

very intriguing if you find the right readers! your a good poet!

wow this is great!!! lots of deatail i like it! this is excellent!! great job!