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Position:Home>Poetry> A name for this poem?Question:Heartbroken and soft spoken Look at what you did to me Was I blinded by your love? No, I just didn't want to see I didn't want to come to terms Couldn't seem to heal I loved that you were all mine And how you made me feel I've missed who you used to be And the way you made me smile But I have gotten better Although it took a little while I've tried fixing what I broke Be the one your mind was on I kept trying and pushing But you were already gone Wanting you hurt me I'm not going to lie But my soul is in repair My tears have all dried Another has my heart And his love is no scam Heartbroken and soft spoken I no longer am ~*~I wrote this for everyone who was wronged by an ex or someone they cared for. My only problem is that I can't find a title. Help please?~*~ Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Heartbroken and soft spoken Look at what you did to me Was I blinded by your love? No, I just didn't want to see I didn't want to come to terms Couldn't seem to heal I loved that you were all mine And how you made me feel I've missed who you used to be And the way you made me smile But I have gotten better Although it took a little while I've tried fixing what I broke Be the one your mind was on I kept trying and pushing But you were already gone Wanting you hurt me I'm not going to lie But my soul is in repair My tears have all dried Another has my heart And his love is no scam Heartbroken and soft spoken I no longer am ~*~I wrote this for everyone who was wronged by an ex or someone they cared for. My only problem is that I can't find a title. Help please?~*~ Heartbroken and soft spoken Oblivious to love Jaded A good title to me i think is " I no longer am" that is the exact last line in your poem. Using the last line of any writing can emphasize and effect of the whole poem , giving it a stronger feel to it. Either "Repaired" or "Now That I Don't Have You, I Don't Need You" i guess you have moved on somehow. i wish i could deal with my heartache too as soon as possible. oh well the only title i could suggest is: love run dried |