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Question:What is better in USA
than the Thanksgiving/Turkey Day?
This is like a coming true wish
and Turkey is the main dish.
Families sit around the table together.
Nobody worries about the weather.
In every home it's sunny.
Thanksgiving dinner is very funny!

Thanks is given
to a friend or a neighbor.
Thanks is received
for kindness and labor.
Gratefulness is expressed in every way
What a nice day!

From house to house happiness spreads.
This was the best
Dinner no one forgets.
Thanks is said for any reason.
This is such a great season!

What do you think?
I know it's the wrong time of year!
Thank you!


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: What is better in USA
than the Thanksgiving/Turkey Day?
This is like a coming true wish
and Turkey is the main dish.
Families sit around the table together.
Nobody worries about the weather.
In every home it's sunny.
Thanksgiving dinner is very funny!

Thanks is given
to a friend or a neighbor.
Thanks is received
for kindness and labor.
Gratefulness is expressed in every way
What a nice day!

From house to house happiness spreads.
This was the best
Dinner no one forgets.
Thanks is said for any reason.
This is such a great season!

What do you think?
I know it's the wrong time of year!
Thank you!

Well you switched your rhyming around a bit which makes it look sloppy. It's cute I guess, but it certainly wouldn't win a poetry contest. Unless you enter in the elementry division.
Sorry if I'm being mean, but I'm just trying to be honest.

nice!

wow!!!! I'm studying poetry at school and that blew my turkey poem out of the water!!!!

I'm a good poet. When I grow up I'll publish my own books. I'm good at rhyming. I started since 3rd grade. Very nice poem!