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Position:Home>Poetry> What do you think of this poem? any title suggestions?Question:One would offer their best foot for bliss A soft,warm touch that accompanies a kiss... Some even took death as their last resort Thinking that the lady was their last to court... This abstract is somewhat our ally for we cannot live withoutfeeling it's lullaby... But it's true form can only be a do-or-die And it's somehow a fact that you can't deny... Like romeo and juliet having their rival house till tristan and isolde had death to separate the spouse... What do you now see with the beating of the heart? having the right, simple reasons that plays the final part? ....thanks for the time! Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: One would offer their best foot for bliss A soft,warm touch that accompanies a kiss... Some even took death as their last resort Thinking that the lady was their last to court... This abstract is somewhat our ally for we cannot live withoutfeeling it's lullaby... But it's true form can only be a do-or-die And it's somehow a fact that you can't deny... Like romeo and juliet having their rival house till tristan and isolde had death to separate the spouse... What do you now see with the beating of the heart? having the right, simple reasons that plays the final part? ....thanks for the time! I think this poem is really good. How about "Tragically In Love" for a title?? Love's Delusion |