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Question:ok this is what i have so far..............
...............it needs to be 20 lines & its for school :(

(its about my cat henry.........lol we had to do a poem on love)


My special feelings for my friend,
go on & on; they never end
he likes to play
in his cute little way.......................

and thats all i got lol............PLEASE HELP ME!!!!!!!!!!!!


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: ok this is what i have so far..............
...............it needs to be 20 lines & its for school :(

(its about my cat henry.........lol we had to do a poem on love)


My special feelings for my friend,
go on & on; they never end
he likes to play
in his cute little way.......................

and thats all i got lol............PLEASE HELP ME!!!!!!!!!!!!

he purrs so sweet,
especially when he is ready to eat
he loves to cuddle up beside me
and lets me pet him so gently
he runs around from room to room
hoping i will catch him soon
he never yells, he never screams
he just meows to talk it seems
he stares at me with his big eyes
waiting to catch me by surprise
his tail sways from left to right
he pounces and jumps day and night
my kitty is always good never bad
he nows when i am happy or sad
when its time for bed, he lays by me
i hope my kitty and me will always be

Don't say "in his cute little way"
Rhyme it with End

So like,

He likes to play
again and again

How old are you anyway?

I'm hoping your sixth grade tops

he sleeps when I'm away, but when I'm back everythings okay
From day to day, month to month
Maybe even take him out lunch
Hey can cats drink fruit punch?

don't panic, see what color henry is, and what he likes to do for fun. Does he prefer certain things? Does he not like this, or really love that. Does he sway when he walks, is he persistant when he talks, just start listing his characteristics, you can do it.

I pat his fur
and make him purr
he stretches out
and rolls about

I hope this helps a little

Hmmmm????

In his cute little way..
In hay
With a....?????

I don't know sorry.. Maybe you can try searching For some cat poems... Just to get some ideas... :)

My special feelings for my friend,
go on & on; they never end
he likes to play
in his cute little way
never does he lie
and i hope he doesn't die
He is an absolute adore
A blazing galore
A heart of gold he has
his compassion is as
Gentle as the light sway of a tree
Always strong never does he flee.
His eyes alight
His soul taking flight
His mind keen and awake
Vigiliant like a hungry crocodile waiting in its lake
His mouth fixed in a grin
Always throws rubbish in the bin!
My friend, a true earnest mate
We shall be friends for eternity, tis this be our fate

i hope it helped lol

try to be more creative and spontanious.

hahhahahah...talk about his fur...or his eyes
the way he purrs
or the way he jumps
when he runs around the house
energetic or sleepy?
when he yawns
the way he sleeps: does he sleeps on his back or on his belly?

there...that should help you

My cat Henry is very friendly
hes so cuddly
i want to hug him ..
.he sits on belly,
creeps to the alley,
he finds a mice and wants a surprise.
We stay up till sunrise

My cat Henry
hes always there
places a smile on my face
Cuz hes my best friend