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Position:Home>Poetry> What do you think about this poem people of yahoo?Question:A liquid sky Smeared across, A canvas of skies Monsters take form in passionate clouds The sun setting on it's prize Opening the gates to it's crapulous demise Amputating souls willingly Making it necessary Acceptable to only those Who wish this fire to burn The "eye" seeing over all A solid stare of a shared turn Pushing and shoving to the front of the line Look to the back of the mind There you will find the influences to the crime Just pride, no fear Do you truthfully understand why you are here? Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: A liquid sky Smeared across, A canvas of skies Monsters take form in passionate clouds The sun setting on it's prize Opening the gates to it's crapulous demise Amputating souls willingly Making it necessary Acceptable to only those Who wish this fire to burn The "eye" seeing over all A solid stare of a shared turn Pushing and shoving to the front of the line Look to the back of the mind There you will find the influences to the crime Just pride, no fear Do you truthfully understand why you are here? LOL, this poem is in no way about nature. I can see how people would be confused - the references to the sky, cloud and sun, but the end of the poem takes a differnt turn. Amputating souls, a burning fire, pride and fear, this is not about nature. I like how the begining sounds heavenly, but then it takes a complete turn to things are hellish ("burning fire", souls). I feel ur vibe, dude. And it like ttly relates to me cause ya know i luv nature. Peace out, man!!! =D Nice. |