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Question:A liquid sky
Smeared across,
A canvas of skies
Monsters take form in passionate clouds
The sun setting on it's prize
Opening the gates to it's crapulous demise
Amputating souls willingly
Making it necessary
Acceptable to only those
Who wish this fire to burn
The "eye" seeing over all
A solid stare of a shared turn
Pushing and shoving to the front of the line
Look to the back of the mind
There you will find the influences to the crime
Just pride, no fear
Do you truthfully understand why you are here?


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: A liquid sky
Smeared across,
A canvas of skies
Monsters take form in passionate clouds
The sun setting on it's prize
Opening the gates to it's crapulous demise
Amputating souls willingly
Making it necessary
Acceptable to only those
Who wish this fire to burn
The "eye" seeing over all
A solid stare of a shared turn
Pushing and shoving to the front of the line
Look to the back of the mind
There you will find the influences to the crime
Just pride, no fear
Do you truthfully understand why you are here?

LOL, this poem is in no way about nature.
I can see how people would be confused - the references to the sky, cloud and sun, but the end of the poem takes a differnt turn.
Amputating souls, a burning fire, pride and fear, this is not about nature. I like how the begining sounds heavenly, but then it takes a complete turn to things are hellish ("burning fire", souls).

I feel ur vibe, dude. And it like ttly relates to me cause ya know i luv nature. Peace out, man!!! =D

Nice.