Could you please read my poem and tell what you think about it?

Question:"A Yearly Turning"

Winter casts it's frozen bloom
Humbling to a floret spring

A warm summers moon
listens
As the evening bird sings

With a palette of chromatic groom
Fall paints it's earthly shades,,,

Winter awaits
This array
Of colorful fade,,,,

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: "A Yearly Turning"

Winter casts it's frozen bloom
Humbling to a floret spring

A warm summers moon
listens
As the evening bird sings

With a palette of chromatic groom
Fall paints it's earthly shades,,,

Winter awaits
This array
Of colorful fade,,,,

Wow, and with a very subtle passion,
great form as well as awesome choice
of words <3

You're gonna go far @)~>~

that is really good. it's creative and it made me really think about it! it is beautiful!=]

I love it! It's short, and sweet, and just beautiful! :]]]

great job ! Im impressed.

tha's great! i luv it! i'm not in2 poetry but that was 1 of the best 1's i've ever heard. u should bcome a proffesional poet like Emily Dickinson. She's my favorite poet.

P.S. it reminds me of the show moonlight 'turning'

It's pretty good. I like it, but you should add some punctuation to help with the way you want people to read it.

i love it. its a great natural poem. it looks like you put a lot of work into it. good job!

Your a natural keep writing. What does a Palette of chromatic groom mean though?

nice imagery
you've taken subject matter I've known forever
and heard about a million boring times
and made it simple and beautiful

it's good to use language as you have to make a real point
also your rhyming wasn't forced and it fit rhythmically. I enjoyed it

A beautiful portrayal of the cycle of seasons, of life itself. There is not a word wasted in this poem; every line is lovely unto itself. I am anxious to see more of your poetry here on Y!A . Thank you.