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Question:"seattle"


Your idle threats to kill me,
you can't kill me, I am dead.
I've been dead inside so long,
all I am's an empty shell.
I've lost all fear of dying,
along with feeling long ago.
You'd just do me a favor,
one less thing needs to be done.
You can never hurt someone,
who has no fear of death.
I used to wish that i was dead,
I've got friends who care instead.


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Your idle threats to kill me,
you can't kill me, I am dead.
I've been dead inside so long,
all I am's an empty shell.
I've lost all fear of dying,
along with feeling long ago.
You'd just do me a favor,
one less thing needs to be done.
You can never hurt someone,
who has no fear of death.
I used to wish that i was dead,
I've got friends who care instead.

indeed u do dark prince!
...don't sweat those that want to destroy ur spirit! that they can never do..
i know u have no fear of but please never have a fear of life my friend!

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Your good!

Keep writing man.

A bit Depressing for me,,,,

this is good work...but it worries me. stay safe!!!!you have more friends than you know , that love you and God loves you too.

i've always thought...
what would happen if i died today?
would you cry?
would you feel lonely?
i bet not...you have so many friends...
whats one more lost? there are many more around you...

i've always thought...
what would happen if i was never born?
would your life be the same?
would you feel like something or someone was missing from your life?
would you be the person you are now?
tell me...do you really care about me?
am i really your friend?