Poems for thursday are gooood. LOL. How is this one.?

Question:"scarlet reign"

The blood it always comes,
from him my only friend.
This pain that I still feel,
deep dark and down inside.
I deserve all of this pain,
for every time I cried.
Contrary to what i think,
I have so much to learn.
Every little cut I make,
and every bright red burn,
my life is so damn lonely,
So quiet and so cold.
My innocence so long ago,
was bought and then was sold.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: "scarlet reign"

The blood it always comes,
from him my only friend.
This pain that I still feel,
deep dark and down inside.
I deserve all of this pain,
for every time I cried.
Contrary to what i think,
I have so much to learn.
Every little cut I make,
and every bright red burn,
my life is so damn lonely,
So quiet and so cold.
My innocence so long ago,
was bought and then was sold.

very nice big bro....
if love is such a wonderful thing...
then why do i feel lonely?
why do i feel sad?
why do i want to cry?
why?
because...thats what you call unrequitted love....
thats why....

~Grasshopper

change sold to soul =excellent.

awwwwwwww! thats deep

its ok.
did u write it?

Thought provoking really. I'm sorry you're so lonely if this is really how you feel.

very deep. strong words

Where does the question come from: did you write it? Duh? I understand and I think it is a good release before the weekend party!! Rock on Steve! Thanks.

OMG!! That's awful!!!!!!!

Not really, but nobody has said that all day, and I didn't want anyone to have withdrawal. It's quite good.