Do YoU LiKe MY PoEmS??!?!?!? L:]?

Question:It's called "go the green way":
the green way is the better way
what can i say?
oceans dirty
airs polluted
when will people learn to do it?
dont litter, recycle, its not that hard.
stupid farmers, stupid farms,
that could of been a koala bears bamboo
but then you decide to steal that too?
let the cows live in peace
what will you do if they go extinct?
what do you think they'd do to you?
after killing them, and eating their meat
the circle of life is not complete
if you want to make mother natures day
do her a favor
go the green way

And this is the other one:
my poem is a special poem that dosnt have a name
it dosnt have a personality
or anything to say
it is nothing-
and even though theres words i write
i dont know what to say
you may like it- you may not
but it wont care
'cause it dosnt have a heart
a poem is a poem
you write what you feel
the peom dosnt have feelings
but every poem has a meaning

so what do you think? thnks, samantha :] :]

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: It's called "go the green way":
the green way is the better way
what can i say?
oceans dirty
airs polluted
when will people learn to do it?
dont litter, recycle, its not that hard.
stupid farmers, stupid farms,
that could of been a koala bears bamboo
but then you decide to steal that too?
let the cows live in peace
what will you do if they go extinct?
what do you think they'd do to you?
after killing them, and eating their meat
the circle of life is not complete
if you want to make mother natures day
do her a favor
go the green way

And this is the other one:
my poem is a special poem that dosnt have a name
it dosnt have a personality
or anything to say
it is nothing-
and even though theres words i write
i dont know what to say
you may like it- you may not
but it wont care
'cause it dosnt have a heart
a poem is a poem
you write what you feel
the peom dosnt have feelings
but every poem has a meaning

so what do you think? thnks, samantha :] :]

I liked the first one best, I got a lot more out of it, just by the way you wrote it. the second was good, just a bit hard to follow. Keep it up though, you have a lot of potential.

It is awosome peice-out dude or dudetts!!!!!!!!!!!!!:):):)):):):)

I loved the first one..the second one was okay..but I felt like it had no meaning.

I liked the second one.

The first one well...
Stupid farmers and stupid farms grow the food you eat.
The cows you wish were free produce the milk you drink. If you drink " soy " milk then a farmer has to grow the soy beans. The same beans that make your tofu alternatives to meat. So no farmer then no Soy beans.
Koala bears live in Australia were they eat Eucalyptus leaves not bamboo.
I respect your ambitions to recycle and help the environment and all but if you are going to speak out speak wisely.