Poem help ..... ?

Question:Tublet, Tublet, I love you.
You are prettier than a stinky brown shoe.

Tublet, Tublet, where art thou?
I love you more than a big, brown cow.

Tublet, Tublet, you are such a good nurse.
How much money is in your fancy purse?

Tublet, Tublet, will you please hold me?
Here is $50 and my hotel room key.

Please rate my poem!

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Tublet, Tublet, I love you.
You are prettier than a stinky brown shoe.

Tublet, Tublet, where art thou?
I love you more than a big, brown cow.

Tublet, Tublet, you are such a good nurse.
How much money is in your fancy purse?

Tublet, Tublet, will you please hold me?
Here is $50 and my hotel room key.

Please rate my poem!

I love it. And please don't add any big words.

fantastic....but can I have the 50 ......she doesnt need it

it was okay.... but u shood proabably add some more differnt vocab words, like more advandced ones

10 for sure, I could write a song with those lyrics if you like?!

well I don't know which tublet you are referring to so I really can't say ... I would add a line
Tublet, Tublet, with horns so thorny?
Let my know if my Poem makes you Ho*ney

damn $50 and a hotel room!, are you trying to marry her?

I found 35 cents and a space between two crack heads under my local bridge was plenty...

(btw don't listen to her, big words make her intimidated and more vulnerable)

A 12. I also like that u did'nt use any big words.

I give it a 9.5 out of 10.

Did you steal the $50 out of her fancy purse?