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Question:This one isn't the best, but the card was hard to draw from. Please, be forgiving.

THREE OF PENTACLES

I am only
the labor-
the skill.
But I know,
instinctive,
the task
given me.
This place
will become
a heaven,
a haven,
made so
by my hands.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: This one isn't the best, but the card was hard to draw from. Please, be forgiving.

THREE OF PENTACLES

I am only
the labor-
the skill.
But I know,
instinctive,
the task
given me.
This place
will become
a heaven,
a haven,
made so
by my hands.

Hun... I love your *Ominous EVERY-THINGS* I am sure to like the other poems, as do I these.

One thing I enjoy about your TCP's that Rouxe can't seem to do, is the condensed and short eloquence of them. You have captured effort in this card and I would assume it was a labor to write parts of it... though it seems writing is the least laborious thing in your life.

*Sedated, yet loving, Smile in Eva's direction*

Why is it the last one? I think they're all rather well done. I like it. Making ones home a heaven is a great thing.

Oh my purring again... This makes me as happy as a kitten batting butterflies...The warrior princess has come back to defend her queen...Huzzah! As you say..Huzzah tee hee that tickles my brain

cool. but why "instinctive," rather than "instinctively"? trying to avoid the rhyme?

Very good!

this one is okay.

the man and the hammer!