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Position:Home>Poetry> Time for one more. Please tell me what you think?Question:Via Tarot PAGE OF WANDS The day is young. The sky smiles, approving. The birds sing triumph, exulting in the knowledge that as of now only Earth knows. Last night, the moon rejoiced. Last night, sweet love was made and a new life came forth. A message from the gods, of everlasting hope. Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Via Tarot PAGE OF WANDS The day is young. The sky smiles, approving. The birds sing triumph, exulting in the knowledge that as of now only Earth knows. Last night, the moon rejoiced. Last night, sweet love was made and a new life came forth. A message from the gods, of everlasting hope. wow powerful love the choice of words that really good its DEEP n really form the heart... ok, so its about sex and birth. title doesnt really fit. Deep ..like deep dish pizza Yummy! I like it and could eat it whole....Your poem I mean. Delicious. judging from this one and the last, you seem to be a talented writer ;) very very nice. a circle i see... see Dezy, sometimes a sword isnt needed. :) we got a sexy moon and an eternal message. Beautiful. Very sweet. |