Another day, another poem. Will you read it please?

Question:From the deck

ACE OF PENTACLES

Dawn,
new wishes
illuminated,
new promises
made.
The road,
untraveled before me;
I am
too willing
to take
that brash
first step

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: From the deck

ACE OF PENTACLES

Dawn,
new wishes
illuminated,
new promises
made.
The road,
untraveled before me;
I am
too willing
to take
that brash
first step

Not finished. But what you have written is good. I was just left with wanting more. Which isn't a bad thing for a writer to do.

Nice... keep writing poetry that means something special to you

That's a beautiful composition. Keep it up!

awesome!.=)

wow that is a GREAT poem it is really deep i could never come up with something like that...please contine doing a GREAT job

Aw poor Eva No comments more than a sentence long..How sad.How boring. But perhaps that is because it's a little boring..What happened to my warrior with her shield a sword bravely raised to fight the gods? I miss her..Please don't tell me that the gods have defeated her ! Noooooo!

short to the point and good

will you go through the whole deck? i think i should look up the meanings of these cards, and i might gain insight into your poetry.
good, keep writing.

illuminated and dawn word are cool..

this thought actually could be taken as a warning as to not take advantage of the new day in front of you..
because the openness of it knows you will storm right in.

a piece of gold found is not always riches,
or what finds you, is not always gold.

Quiet moments birth joy in daylight!