Poem opinions please!!?

Question:Limerick
There once was a cat named Tess
Who thought she was quite a princess
She sat on her throne
where she was quite at home
Until she was dethroned by jess
i need help with the last line??

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Limerick
There once was a cat named Tess
Who thought she was quite a princess
She sat on her throne
where she was quite at home
Until she was dethroned by jess
i need help with the last line??

Until rudely dethroned by Queen Jess?

There once was a cat named Ms. Tess
who thought she was quite the Princess
So she sat on her throne
Where she felt quite at home
until rudely dethroned by Dog Jess

I am not the limerick expert, but I like the limerick you made and the beats seem to fit with the edit above. What do you think?

is this poem comming from coolio? the person who wrote gangsters paradise? if so you changed your style up lol

I don't see where it needs another line.