What do you think of this tanka i wrote, honesty is the key.? i actually did thi

Question: What do you think of this tanka i wrote, honesty is the key!.!? i actually did this for an english assignment!.!?

I walk alone now,
away from all the concrete
toward the water
underneathe the lonely moon
i walk alone to find youWww@QuestionHome@Com

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I think that Tanka is really good!. It has an awesome meaning!. I love the last line " I walk alone to find you"!. Its just so centimental!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

it is nice!!!
u can write more !
write if it's really you who write this:)Www@QuestionHome@Com