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Magic
There is a magic in the way you move, something so honest and pure that I can't quite get used to!.
There is a magic in the way you speak, something that moves through me making my senses grow weak!.
There is a magic that lives inside your eyes, with each look a flood of emotions from which I cannot hide!.
There is a magic deep down in your soul, a magic with which I wish to grow old!.
A friend of mine wrote this poem and I wanted to see what other people thought about it!. Thank you for your opinion!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
this is a really nice poem!. but not deep enough if thats what they are going for!. nice work!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Sounds like a song I think I've heard somewhere!. Should this really be in the philosophy section!?
Anyways, I mean it's not bad or anything but it's kind of cliche!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
it sounds vaguely familiar, did you friend take it from somewhere and change magic for another word!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
i think it's very good!. i like how the words rhyme!. it's defintally a lot better than i could do!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
It is really bad!.Www@QuestionHome@Com