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Question: Read this Other poem!?
as i sit thinking of what life would be like if there was no you
telling the truth seems so hard to bare
i think of the stars
feel the wind rush through my hair

Sounds of the ocean seem so comepling
i hear your voice wanting
breathing
listening
to every word that i say,
the moment is know its forever

I run around circling the earth!.
everything is so quiet
i can only hear you, only you
i am deep within thought i seem to have been gone for some time

I try to reach for something to grab onto, bring my self up
than I realized your the one there standing holding me up!Www@QuestionHome@Com


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Aww <3 Cute!


I liked it! The rhythm isn't the best, but I like the end =]Www@QuestionHome@Com

Quite nice, heartfelt+interesting, 8/10, liked it!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Interesting and heartfelt, good!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com