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Question: What do you think of these lyrics!?!?!?
Im slipping away
Everythings falling,i just cant make is stay
You turn away
More and more you tear everything away
Tell me what was i!?!?!?
I cant explain what this pain does
You ripped everything from the inside
God i just want to take it all away
Tired of trying to smile on the outside
Now i feel like im starting to decay
What was i!?!?!?
What was i!?!?!?
You ripped everything from the inside
God i just want to take it all away
Tired of trying to smile on the outside
Now i feel like im starting to decay
Away,away,away,away!.
I just wish we could start over today
Go back and live in the moment
I guess its all going away
I'll just sit here and watch everything i hold dear fade right away
!.!.!.What was i!?!?!?
What do u guys think!?!?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Amazing!. Absolutely wow! I read you other lyrics too and they were amazing as well!. You're two for two!. I think you should like put them to a melody and harmony, then send it to a radio station!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
just another emo song!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I LOVE IT!. my favorite part is
"I wish we could start over today
Go back and live in the moment
i guess its all going away
I'll just sit here and watch everything i hold dear fade right away"Www@QuestionHome@Com
It sounds like you're losing someone you love!.!.!.kindof sad like you feel like you're going to die or something if you don't get that person back!.!.!.hmmm!?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
not bad!
maybe a slightly deeper chorus!.!.!.!.but really nice!.
i would listen to it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com