My Stand-up routine...?

Question: My Stand-up routine!.!.!.!?

Please tell me what you think of this segment of my stand-up act!. I'm by no means professional yet but would like to be there someday soon!.

http://youtube!.com/watch!?v=Ej7xSw6cYe8Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I enjoyed it very much!. You seem very at ease up there!. I appreciate the lack of cursing since I do think that there is a lot of profanity just for the sake of profanity!. There are times when I think your routine sounds a bit too memorized like you haare reciting a precise phrase that you wrote down!. The best example I can remember is your lead-ins to your mom and grandad!. I would skip the "I'd like to share thios with you"-part and get right into the material!.

But overall, I liked it and would want to see moreWww@QuestionHome@Com