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Please tell me if this poem i wrote is good or bad?

title:Places to go places to see

Of all the places I have not yet been

beyond the vast desert to the four water giants

down under to the earths mantle and into its core

up into the midnight sky

between the nature of humans and animals

beneath the deep depths of the ocean

within the human mind

Of all the places I would like to be is here in my own home


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: awww! it's sweet! but it is true "there is no place like home"
i likes a lot.