I need some criticism.. for my dancing?

Question: I need some criticism!.!. for my dancing!?

Yeah, I need some help on my dancing skills haha!. If anyone has some tips on how to smoothen it out and anything else please help me out!. Oh and I know my breakdancing skills are horrible cause I've only started a little bit ago so don't reiterrate that!.!. Thanks in advanced!.!.

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your arms could be more cohesive!. they're kind of limp!. but wow! you've got some great moves!. good job!. you're also pretty musical, which is impressive!. also, cut the apologies!. your breaking is fine!. if you went into an audition and said "sorry about my breaking" they would just send your right out!. but you're a great dancer and keep it up!! you're amazing and a great mover!. kudosWww@QuestionHome@Com

Dude that is some seriously awesome **** and I'm sure people tell you that all the time!.
The breakdancing does need a little work but as I'm into hard dance myself (melbourne shuffle) I know as well as you do that the only way to improve is practise in all different situations, in crowded clubs, at home alone, everywhere and in every way you can!.
You probably already know theres shitloads of videos on the net teachin all that sort of stuff so best advice i can give is use google to find some ****!.
Its obvious you really enjoy it and have put a lot of work in so just keep it up dude!.
No **** mate you're fukkin sick and you're only gonna get better, you dont need our advice just do it and love it!.
Take it easy mate hope i didnt bore you to death hahaWww@QuestionHome@Com

yeah i agree, it was really cool, far from what i can do, but you need to involve your hands when you move your feet that fast!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

not bad but I think you're gonna be better off doing as well as you can in academics, whether
you seek a dancing career or not!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You got some good tricks on your lower body try and let the upper part join the partyWww@QuestionHome@Com

You got some fast moving feet, but your arms look like they are not involved!. Move them around too!.Www@QuestionHome@Com