A very odd Poem....Comments Please????!!!<3<3<3?

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A very odd Poem....Comments Please????!!!<3<3<3?

I am crying tears of memory's
Just because I can.
Living in the darkness
Because you can't see me there.
Opening up to no one
Because there is no one I can trust.
Verifying fears from dreams
That I thought were never real.
Everything is so confusing
And I just want to let it out.
You mean so much to me
If only you could see that.
Only if I could
I would tell you how I feel.
Unique in my own way
I can never be the same.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Well, to start with, it's not odd at all. You did a fine job.

You did decent with punctuation. You DO NOT need to, but you could, add in a few commas. But like I said, it's not necessary for this poem.

The repetition with "because" in the beginning of the poem was good. Maybe add in a few towards the end? to keep it going? But you also don't need that.

These are just things to add to your poem, only for your liking.

good job, and keep writing.

*edit* by the way, the emotion in your poem is very clear. You did a good job with getting your point across. I have read so many poems here that don't have a point to them.

~Black and White~