Do you like my do-over?

Question:

Do you like my do-over?

Whispered words
Melt passing by
Thoughts inside tumble
As you smile
Strands of hair part
Ear strains to listen
Soft passing by
They fall to your toes
Scattered,
Whispered words

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3 days ago
Yes, Lord Tomtom, you are licensed to use whatever I post as shot for the next volley.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: 3 days ago
Yes, Lord Tomtom, you are licensed to use whatever I post as shot for the next volley.