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Poem 9 - 3-7-06?

I let you in with hope and zeal
Didn't know that was the deal
My childish heart you came to steal
Should've seen it wasn't real
The same as me you didn't feel
Discarded like a broken wheel
Inside myself will never heal
Murkier than lips of teal


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: when you write a verse next time

go easy on the forced rhyme