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What do you think?

Why do we fall for people, who are not going to catch us. Why do we wait for people, who are not coming. Why do we try, knowing we will never succeed. and most of all, Why do we get up, knowing everyones gonna put you down.

be honest, if it sucks, tell me.
if its good, then yay. (:


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: its good, but its more like a prose. try refining it, pick words that will pick the heart... because I think, youre walking man... try dancing! thats how poetry works. good luck =)