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Position:Home>Arts & Humanities> Here is my opening happy poem for Sunday. Comments are always welcome. ????Question: Here is my opening happy poem for Sunday. Comments are always welcome. ????time Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: This is really deep, and it's understandable too. Most ryming poems sound cheesy, but this one doesn't. I love your poems. There's one thing about it that I didn't exactly like. The ending. It was too.....hmmmm......too much like you're looking for something to ryme with remembered. how about "Will I even be remembered?" will something like this be heard? or something deeper..... It's great though. Keep it up, you're a great artist. I admire your style and details. As I admire you too. |