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First poem of the day. please comment.?

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title-molester

what he did to little kids was a disgrace,
ruining them, taking their faith.
sticking his hand where it doesn't belong,
doing no right, but to him doing no wrong.


he vandalized them of their integraty,
taking their innocence all for his own.
he'd wait ti'll dark,when the hour was right,
knowing that he'd win if they put up a fight.


what he did left people in shock,
no one suspected the evil he had done.
he claimed he was innocent, through and through,
saying the accusation's were untrue.


he went to court, dressed and prepared,
thinking he was going to win this and be free.
what he didn't expect was a bullet to the chest,
looks like there was one more person they were going to arrest.


when they looked for the killer they found a little boy,
in his hand was a gun that was still warm.
when they asked what happend, the little boy said,
"i just wanted my daddy, the molester, dead."

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2 weeks ago
no, this has nothing to do with me.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: 2 weeks ago
no, this has nothing to do with me.