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My poem love 1?

princess claire

princess was the first word from my heart and now its hiding away in my heart
princess was said while i hugged and kissed your sweet blueberry lips
princess is someone that is gorgeous and has the whole world held at her finger tips
princess was something i called you over the phone and msn to show how much i loved you
princess's are something only in fairytales yet you was so real
princess is a word that i once spoke but now their's no use for it as your no longer around
the princess can only be you!!!


well what do you guys think....i made this a few months back just after i split with my gf of 2 years....now looking into my draw's i found it hehe so do you reckon i sud send it her....any tips cheers


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: This poem is kinda bad, actually its really bad. It's superficial, condescending, and has so many cliches!!!! Get an imagination!