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New poem??

a murder, the perfect crime
an icicle melts before fateful time
before the crime can be,
and the victim's soul is free
because life made it disappear
a puddle to collect the tear
of the child or the son
of the murdered one.

I know the punctuation needs work, but ignore that.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: It's nice. It reminded me of a hitchcock episode where a woman killed her husband with a frozen leg of lamb then served it to the police investigating the crime for dinner.

Back to the poem. I liked your a puddle to collect the tear line.