Please anyone read my poem and tell me what you think. It's a little dark and m

Question:

Please anyone read my poem and tell me what you think. It's a little dark and mysterious!!?

My heart throbbing violently
Thye breath is taken away
The look goes pale
No brightness left to day,
The coffin opens more
What secrets lie inside
The people sob with sorrow
There's nowhere left to hide,
I walk to the front
Hands shaking feverishly
Face losing all color
The truth releases fear,
I drop to the floor
I scream and no one hears
I cry and no one moves
I die and no one cares,
The firepit is opened
The last of what remains
The love fpreshadows all
The heart has gone astray,
The meaning of truth are lies
Within the lies are truth
The world's forever spinning
The echoes still continue,
the family moves on
Love only goes so deep
The meaning forever lost
The words still in keep,
Beneath the torchered corpse
Lies the torchered soul
Always in exitance
Forever lost to all,
The deep lies before me
The ocean ever near
The echoes forever haunts
The words I've always feared,
What lies ahead a mystr'y
What you take is what you get
Don't look back.

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2 weeks ago
AFTER THE LAST COMMA IT'S SUPPOSED TO BE:

What lies ahesd a mystr'y
What you take is what you get
Don't look back and don't regret
Don't hold on and don't forget

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: 2 weeks ago
AFTER THE LAST COMMA IT'S SUPPOSED TO BE:

What lies ahesd a mystr'y
What you take is what you get
Don't look back and don't regret
Don't hold on and don't forget