Question:
What do you think ?
here i am falling down deep into the black
no human voice around me i cant find my way back
chaos seems to hold me here with nothing but the smoke
it fills me up and consumes me i swear im going to choke
if someone could hear me they maybe could shed some light
if someone could feel me they could hold me tight
im trying to cry , so god can hear my call
but theres not an answer and i continue to fall
how long have i been here, and how far does it go
i cant think of an answer so i dont really know
my arms are swinging and my legs kick through the air
theres noone here to hear me noone here to care
i reach out for a wall or something to hold me in place
i try to really hard but im a nameless face
here i am falling into a endless black
forever ill be waiting till someone pulls me back
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Very nice, artistic, poetic, real good.