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Fallen. Another dreadful poem by moi. comments welcome?

Open up my bleeding heart,
What does it mean to you?
If it gets hurt,
Can I depend on you?
I know you say your always there,
When I need you most.
But how can I be certain,
You're not yet another ghost?
You mean the world to me,
But this remains to be seen.
I do not believe,
That you could ever be happy with me.
I have to many problems,
And you seem as perfect as it can get.
I love you,
And you say you love me.
But is this just a lie of misery?

Time goes on as I fall,
And you are always there to catch me,
But there will be a time,
When you aren't there,
And my fall will really hurt me.
So my friend,
Will you leave me to my fall?
One day you will,
It can't be helped,
That's just destiny.
So I wait for the perfect time,
To step from my greatest hight,
And have have no one there to save me.
So let me go love.
Just let me fall.

Sort of written for a friend, who keeps saying he will never let me fall. Sort of writen because of my mood at the moment.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: OMG ur really good..i love reading poetry and i really really enjoyed your poem keep up the good work =)