Is my story worth reading???

Question:

Is my story worth reading???

1st chapter:
http://www.quizilla.com/users/xxsilentcr...

2nd chapter:
http://www.quizilla.com/users/xxsilentcr...

3rd chapter:
http://www.quizilla.com/users/xxsilentcr...

its really boring right now but eventually theres gonna be a war i already know how its gonna happen i just need to make the begining a little more clear b4 i can do anything

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I can't access the story either, but I can still give a few pointers.
Find a good friend to "beta read" your stories before you post them. That is, read for grammer, characterization, sense, and flow.

Btw, also check out fanfiction.net You can archieve your story there as well, and I think they have some writing guides.

And finally, keep writing. Your skills will only get better. Also, read other books/stories, so you get an idea of how plot and such should flow.