An old poem (long) honest critique? please?! what can i change in this poem?

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An old poem (long) honest critique? please?! what can i change in this poem?

isolated in my misery
tormented by a memory
swallowed up in agony
must i now die alone?

nothing's changed
nothing's changed

i can feel this fire * burning
of the anger that's now rising
fleeting hopes and dreams
of healing
that now stagnate within me
dying

nothing's changed
nothing's changed

the darkness now prevailing
hiding me under it's shadow
as the desperation
this devastation
now engulfs my soul

friends and mourners * together come
paying homeage to my grave
yet did they not one thing for me -
but enable me to eternity
and further take me from this place

nothing's changed

intercessors - weeping
were there any?
none at all
pleading that he might
turn back his wrath
that now comsumes my soul

nothing's changed

the nightmare of this torturous existence
nothing's changed
the devastation deep within my soul
nothing's changed

(*wait for last verse)

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3 days ago
indifferent to my existence
i have not a reason living
save the reality of your apathy
the (burning) of my emnity
and the remnant of despair.

nothing's changed.

3 days ago
*sighs* okay..... that's it! its kinda stupid and sappy and long..... (its an 'older one') but.... BE HONEST AND BE NICE OKAY? what can i edit out of there? what changes can i make? i know its kinda dumb but i like it in a sick sad way okay? so how can i make it better? IT NEEDS WORK!! lol

3 days ago
oh and fyi .... i isnt a poet and i isnt trying to be.... lol;
......but good feedback thankyou!

3 days ago
... WHAT IF I CUT OUT ALL THE SAPPY .......BLAH BLAH "NOTHINGS CHANGED CRAP?" i dont necessarily wanna chuck this poem into the fire if i dont have to....... which according to Elaine i should....lol.
i dont care if you like it.... i just want honesty; what can i do to make it better?

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: 3 days ago
indifferent to my existence
i have not a reason living
save the reality of your apathy
the (burning) of my emnity
and the remnant of despair.

nothing's changed.