Question:
My Flame- comments??
I am a Flame, burning strong,
I will burn all night long,
If the wind blows, my flame won't go out,
It will stay tall and stout,
I stay big and bold,
never doing what i'm told,
I will burn long and Bright,
Burning with a brilliant light,
Through the night I will fight,
To keep my flame Alight,
I will burn forever on,
Even after Gabriels song,
You can't blow me out,
You can't stop me, theres no doubt,
I am not an ordinary flame,
My fire is not the same,
My fire is from the Soul,
Its a fire you can't control,
Everyday, Every hour,
I will burn with a Renewed power,
You will not stop me from burning,
For my soul has a yearning,
A yearning to burn, and burn it shall,
Forever on , without a doubt.
Kara.
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Thats really good!!! It says a lot, and sends out a strong message. I like the part when it talks about how you wont stop me from burning. Sounds like you are a determined person. It's really really good. I liked it a lot. Congrats!!!!!!