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Question:
"Makes me wanna die" poem please read and comment?
It just kills me
I cannot breathe
take this sword if you will
and cut out my heart
it hurts too much to keep inside
twisted inside it is this torment
a creature that has taken over
I can't breathe when I see you
it's not fair
noone warned me
I wish they had
what can I do now
I'm down on my knees but I have run out of tears
I hate what you've done
when will you get your demise
all alone I have suffered this loss
I sit here in the dark feeling pathetic
while you are out there without a care
I'm in this prison of fear
so afraid to open my eyes
This burning in my chest
makes me wanna die
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I love it, it reminds me of my first broken heart. Thanks for submiting this.