Here is a poem I woke up at 4am to write for the most beautiful woman in the wor

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Here is a poem I woke up at 4am to write for the most beautiful woman in the world. Comments please??

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The most beautiful woman I know,
She gives off a luminous glow.
I see her at night, She's my fantasy sight
I'm at her mercy, she's my every delightI

I've never even met with this girl,
My heart so open,like an oyster with pearl.
She consumes me like fire, massive desire
Shes as hot as a norse funeral pyre.

This poem that I write at four
for a girl I want more and more.
I'd do anything, just to feel her sting,
I'm crazy in love, and can't do a thing.

The girl that I love is far away,
Even though we both want to play.
If everything works itself out,
I love you, from the mountains I'd shout

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Steve, that is the BEST poem you have ever written. That girl, she's REALLY lucky.