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Position:Home>Arts & Humanities> Sensory Remembrance....A poem....Would you please take a look?Question: Sensory Remembrance....A poem....Would you please take a look?Sensory Remberance Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I like the choices you've made here. You have some effective concrete images. I like that you opened with smell because that actually is supposed to trigger memory--it felt very real, like we were being let into the moment with the narrator. I appreciated flitted. It made your grandmother's touch seem like an elusive hummingbird.. The hearing strophe seemed a little incomplete, not bad by any means, but I wanted more there. Hazelnut coffee: Wonderful. to go with the cup of joy, which is my life. That was a very satisfying ending. I liked the uplifting feeling in light of a sad event. Thank you for sharing this. |